The graphs below show the products’ distribution and consumers’ comments regarding “Free-From” products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the products’ distribution and consumers’ comments regarding “Free-From” products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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process diagram illustrates how smoked
fish
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are made.
Overall
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, there are thirteen various steps in order to achieve a smoked
fish
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, which start from when they are caught from the river or sea and end at a
fish
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selling shop.
Firstly
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, the diagram showed a river, and a
fish
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boat with
fish
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in a net.
This
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step is followed by the arrival of the
fish
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to the port, where they are sorted before freezing. After the
fish
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has been frozen, it
then
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thaws inside fresh water to
de frozen
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de-frozen
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, which is
further
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cut open with a knife.
This
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process is
then
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followed by soaking the
fish
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in saltwater alongside yellow colour, which is smoked with firewood, before packaging it in a box. At
this
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point, the
fish
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is kept in a 0-degree freezer, before proceeding to a cold store awaiting distribution. The
fish
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is
further
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distributed to
fish
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shops for sale using a van. In general, smoke
fish
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goes through a complex process to be achieved.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Vocabulary: Replace the words fish with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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