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The table gives some of the results of two surveys of a city's residents, asking for their opinions about certain aspects of living in the city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The table gives some of the results of two surveys of a city's residents, asking for their opinions about certain aspects of living in the city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the results of residents'
responds
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responses
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 about different
characteristic
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characteristics
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 of dwelling in the metropolis between two years, namely in 2006 and 2016.
Overall
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, among
five
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the five
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 components shops and education were the most frequent
responds
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respondents
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 as a good choice in both years.
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with
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with,
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 shops and education were one of the best aspects and ranged between 65% to 77%.
Moreover
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, employment opportunities and public transport reached a high percentage in 2006
however
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, the choice in 2016 has significantly changed and the percentage of these aspects became
on
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one
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 of the smallest
compare
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compared
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woth
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with
 others. Regarding the percentage of living environment and medical services, it stayed
simmilar
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similar
 and ranged between 46% to 68%
that
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which
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 was
on
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one
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 of the rare
choice
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choices
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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