The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given scheme illustrates how the electrical
energy
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generated
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by
geothermal
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the geothermal
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zone. We can evidently see that the production of
energy
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is a very complicated process which contains five steps. First of
all
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I want to admit that
whole
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action begins
from
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cold water which drops down to the 4,5 km
of
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deep to the injection well.
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this
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water invasion
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hot rocks called
geothermal
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a geothermal
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zone. During the next phase the hot water accumulates in the production well and rockets up to the condenser as
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steam which begins to rotate the turbine.
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result
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the generator is powered by the turbine and produces
energy
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. Thanks to
this
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method we have electricity for industrial and personal consumption. In
conclusion
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I would like to summarize that the the production of electricity by geothermal resources can generate a significant amount of
energy
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.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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