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Studying a language in a country where it is spoken by the majority of citizens is the best way to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Learning a new
language
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 in a region where it is verbally used by a large number of people who live there is the greatest choice to study a foreign
language
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. I completely agree with
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 statement as people who have lived for a long time
in
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particular
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a particular
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 region are developing some slang
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 which are important verbally.
Consequently
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, some connections in the neighbourhood are helping students to develop in some aspects of the
language
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.
To begin
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 with, some community members who have stayed for a long time in an environment are articulating several
improvement
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 that critical for
student's
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students'
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 vocabularies. Human interactions are not limited to formal
words
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,
it
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also
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 produce non-formal
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.
Furthermore
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, some non-formal
words
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 are not included in a dictionary as it is occur spontaneously.
For instance
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, the word
cinga
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conga
 was used
in
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particular
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the particular
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 context in
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the mexican
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mexican
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Mexican
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 community.
Thus
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, the native speakers of
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the mexican
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mexican
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language
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are articulating
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 some special signs in their daily conversation.
As a result
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, native speakers might be useful in the learner's process of learning new lingo. The process may
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 some advantages because the learner can confirm several misunderstandings to the locals directly.
Moreover
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, the locals will be able to assist the students as they meet
in
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 a
day to day
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 basis.
In addition
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, some questions
that
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propose
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 by the beginners will be answered from many perspectives by the natives.
For example
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, a lack of
undestanding
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understanding
 in some informal
way
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ways
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 of communication
such
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 as slang
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 and some rigid definitions which only occur
in particular
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 cultures can be tackled with the help of other people in a nation.
Hence
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, their roles are critical in order to assist beginners.
To sum up
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, the development of native languages
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 crucial for learners' lingo stocks.
Subsequently
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, their contribution is
also
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 vital during
beginner's
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 understanding process.

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task achievement
Expand on your ideas and provide more specific examples to support your arguments. This will enhance the clarity and depth of your points.
coherence and cohesion
Consider improving the logical flow between your ideas. Ensure that each paragraph builds on the previous one and connects clearly to your main argument.
task achievement
The essay presents a clear opinion in agreement with the statement, showcasing a solid stance on the issue.
task achievement
The use of specific examples helps to illustrate the points made, even though more examples could enhance the essay further.
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