You are just back from a long journey and you met an airline hostess who was rude to you on the plane. Write a letter to the manager and in the letter, you should mention: • Why did you write this letter? • What did this hostess do to you? • What is your expectation? You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Madam or Sir, I am writing to you to report the problem I have with one of your
hostess
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. I took
long
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the long
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journey from Turkey to England and I woke up at 6am
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Saturday
for
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fliying
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flying
because of that I was hurrying up to
arrive
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get
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to
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on
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the
airplane
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aeroplane
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and I was tired. I asked a
favor
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from your hostess
who her
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name is Jess Smith, I pressed ring
buton
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button
to want
an
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bottle of water. She came to me and said you have
yo
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to
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wait a few
second
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. I said
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" That's
okay, I can wait
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she did not come back for an hour. I pressed ring
buton
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button
again, she came back with
an
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bottle of water after that she said do not press
buton
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button
, we were busy. I was
extremly
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extremely
suprised
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surprised
with her words. I expect that you will take
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action towards her
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that situation.
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, I could suggest that you give her a
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warning
about
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roblem
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problem
.
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, She could have been kinder towards to customer. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration. Best regards Deniz Y.

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coherence and cohesion
Consider organizing your letter into clearer paragraphs, separating the reason for writing, the incident, and your expectations.
task achievement
Make sure all sentences are grammatically correct and check for typos or spelling errors, such as 'fliying' and 'warrning'.
suitable writing tone
Try to use a more formal tone; for example, instead of 'do not press button', you could say 'please refrain from pressing the button'.
task achievement
You clearly explained the reason for writing your letter and provided specific details about the incident.
suitable writing tone
You maintained a polite closing, which is important in formal communication.
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