You are just back from a long journey and you met an airline hostess who was rude to you on the plane. Write a letter to the manager and in the letter, you should mention: • Why did you write this letter? • What did this hostess do to you? • What is your expectation? You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Madam or Sir, I am writing to you to report the problem I have with one of your

hostess

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. I took

long

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the long

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journey from Turkey to England and I woke up at 6am

last

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Saturday

for

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fliying

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flying

because of that I was hurrying up to

arrive

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get

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the

airplane

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aeroplane

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and I was tired. I asked a

favor

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from your hostess

who her

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name is Jess Smith, I pressed ring

buton

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button

to want

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bottle of water. She came to me and said you have

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wait a few

second

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. I said

thats

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" That's

okay, I can wait

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she did not come back for an hour. I pressed ring

buton

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button

again, she came back with

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bottle of water after that she said do not press

buton

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button

, we were busy. I was

extremly

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extremely

suprised

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surprised

with her words. I expect that you will take

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apply

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action towards her

due to

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that situation.

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, I could suggest that you give her a

warrning

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warning

about

this

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roblem

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problem

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, She could have been kinder towards to customer. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration. Best regards Deniz Y.

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coherence and cohesion

Consider organizing your letter into clearer paragraphs, separating the reason for writing, the incident, and your expectations.

task achievement

Make sure all sentences are grammatically correct and check for typos or spelling errors, such as 'fliying' and 'warrning'.

suitable writing tone

Try to use a more formal tone; for example, instead of 'do not press button', you could say 'please refrain from pressing the button'.

task achievement

You clearly explained the reason for writing your letter and provided specific details about the incident.

suitable writing tone

You maintained a polite closing, which is important in formal communication.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

187 words

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