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The line chart below shows the number of cars produced in three countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the number of cars produced in three countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart provides key information about the number of Argentina,
Australia
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, and Thailand produced cars from 2003 to 2009. The units are measured in thousands.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that
Australia
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 was the major expense.
In addition
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,
Australia
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 was the largest car producer between 2003 and 2009,
whereas
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 Argentina was the smallest.
According to
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 what is shown,
Australia
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 had slightly increased from 300 to 400 between 2003 and 2005, but after that had a significant increase from 400 to 1119 between 2005 and 2009. Thailand had gradually increased from 161 to 999 between 2003 and 2009. In terms of Argentina in 2003, it was the largest nation with 400 cars every year, but in 2005, it rapidly decreased from 400 to 200 in 2005. And in 2009 was 100.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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