The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)
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The diagram below represents the
water
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cycle. The picture shows a continuous movement of
water
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on, above, and below the surface of the Earth. The
water
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in the diagram has many
stage
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,
such
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as becoming a liquid gas and
then
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becoming a solid. The first
step
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if we look closer to the
ocean
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the
water
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is a liquid. And the next
step
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will be evaporation in the air. The gas of
water
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will gather together. When the
color
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colour
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of
clouds
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the clouds
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was dark tone or grey.
Then
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the
water
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would rain. If the clouds were rain under the mountains. The
water
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of rain would be snow. Because on the high ground will have a low temperature.
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, if the rain drops on the hill. It will turn into be pond. The
last
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of the cycle is the
water
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in a pond. It will lie down into the
ocean
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. All of the many solutions. It presents about how the
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cycle is. And it had many ways.
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, in the first
step
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, the
water
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was in the
ocean
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, and
then
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it was volatile in the air turn into gas form.
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, it was raining. Next
step
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the
water
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will lay from the mountain and end with the
ocean
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. The
water
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can change
their
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its
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stage it was depends on the temperature
in
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at
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the same time.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, step, ocean with synonyms.
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