Discuss the role of lifestyle choices in maintaining overall health. Consider factors such as diet, exercise, and stress management. How can individuals make informed choices to promote their well-being?” You should give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge to support your response.

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physical and mental fitness of

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diet,exercise and stress management interventions.

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some of them to prevent advanced

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a healthy routine for which they try some dietary intake to prevent

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malnutrition and keep their physical

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the stress in daily routine. These factors are truly important to keep

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body and mind healthy and active for a longer period of their total lifespan. These all are active

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

Overall health
Lifestyle choices
Balanced diet
Nutrition
Exercise
Mental health
Physical health
Stress management
Aerobic
Strength training
Flexibility exercises
Well-being
Preventative care
Chronic diseases
Healthcare professionals
Mindfulness
Resilience
Sedentary lifestyle
Time management
Informed choices
Health promotion
Disease prevention
Lifestyle diseases
Health consciousness
Healthy habits

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some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. to what extent do you agree and disagree?

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