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Band 3

Studying a language in a country where it is spoken by the majority of citizens is the best way to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some
people
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 state that learning
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language
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a language
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 in a foreign
country
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 is the best way to learn their formal
language
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. I totally
agreee
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agree
 with it.
First,
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take oral English
for example
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, talking with local
people
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help
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 avoid accents.
Besdies
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Besides
, there are words that are meaningful only in the cultural background
in
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 the
language
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 spoken
country
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. When living in the
circumestances
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circumstances
, learners can better understand the essentials
behind
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. Immersing oneself in the
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language speaking
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 environment benefits the learners more than sitting in the
classrooms
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classroom
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.
Although
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 learning
the
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apply
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grammer
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grammar
,
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and memeroizing
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memeroizing
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memorising
 words and phrases are important as they are essential for composing
sentances
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sentences
 and
express
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 oneself, thinking in the
way
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same way
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 as
native
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a native
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 speaker is pivotal. Researchers found that
traslate
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translate
 what
people
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 want to say in their brain is a waste of time. The beginners would better take the steps forward as
a new born children
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a new born child
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 by learning everything as never heard before and
develop
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developing
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 the new
language
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 system
instead
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 of building
the
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a
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 connection with their mother
tounge
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tongue
.
Also
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, staying in a foreign
country
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 can help build confidence. Compared to students who need to be excellent in
language
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test
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tests
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, beginners will never worry about being laughed
or
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at or
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 making mistakes.
To sum up
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, the best learning
language
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 method is
stay
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to stay
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 in
the
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a
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 foreign
country
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 for a
while
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,
be
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and be
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 confident to
talk
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talking
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 to
people
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.

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Enhance the introduction by clearly stating your position and briefly outlining the reasons you will discuss.
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Improve logical flow between paragraphs and within each paragraph to enhance readability.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use more varied and accurate language to express your ideas; this can help elevate your overall score.
Task Achievement
You present your personal opinion clearly, which is important for the task.
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You make an interesting point about the cultural context influencing language understanding.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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