The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs illustrate the
percentage
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of electrical appliances owned and hours spent on doing housework per week by households in one country, between the
years
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1920 and 2019.
Overall
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,By the end of the
period
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majority of people owned refrigerators and vacuum cleaners.
consequently
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,time spent on doing household work rapidly reduced. In detail, The
percentage
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of people owing fridges and vacuum cleaners reached its peak by 100 % in the year 2000 and remained stable till the end.
Although
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the usage of refrigerators was 0 in 1920 it saw rapid growth throughout the
years
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until
1980s
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the 1980s
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, when it reached its full potential.
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, the
percentage
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of individuals owning refrigerators was 30% in the beginning and dramatically rose over the
years
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, until it reached 100% in the year 2000.
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, the
percentage
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of people buying washing machines didn't fluctuate much, as it remained between 40% and 75% throughout the
years
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.
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, as the usage of electrical appliances increased, the quantity of time spent on household work declined. The amount of time invested per week in the
house
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housework
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works
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namely washing clothes, preparing meals and cleaning was approximately 50 hours in
1920's
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the 1920's
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, which rapidly decreased to slightly above 10 hours in the year 2019.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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