The graph below shows the changes in weekly food consumption per person in Great Britain from 1985 to 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The line diagram represents the number of food consumed by one British person per gram in a week between 1985 and 2010. In the big picture, it is conspicuous that meat, salt, and fish had different trends in 25 years. Turning to meet consumption, there was a gradual increase in the observed periods, starting at 100 in 1985 and ending at 200 in 2010.

While

Linking Words

the previous category reached a peak

in

Change the preposition

at

show examples

the end of

period

Add an article

the period

show examples

, salt was documented contrastly by having the lowest point in 2010, after plummeting from just below 500 in the initial period. Moving to the

last

Linking Words

category called fish, in the first 15 years, the number of these meals eaten

were fluctuated

Change to the active voice

fluctuated

have fluctuated

show examples

because in the initial

survey

Add a comma

survey,

show examples

this

Linking Words

reported steady growth before declining to the same point. After that, the statistics of a person consuming fish recovered significantly by 50% and ended at the highest point.