The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The carts below represent the variety of activities spent by working adults in a particular country between 1958 and 2008.

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, most activities are preferred the same way,

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some of

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experienced a shift in trend. It is apparent that working is the most trending activity in both years, in fact, the percentages grew by 9% in the year 2008. The next most popular activity that sustained a

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difference is sleeping, which was recorded to only decrease slightly from 1958 (32%) to 2008 (25%). Other activities

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as relaxing at home, playing sports, and traveling to work increased in popularity by up to 6% in 2008.

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, working adults no longer choose to spend their time going out with their friends or family.

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activity used to be in the top 3 options for working adults to spend their time in 1958, unfortunately, it was shown to decrease by 13% in 2008.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

155 words

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