The chart below shows the number of jobs in tourism related industries in one UK city between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of jobs in tourism related industries in one UK city between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the number of jobs in tourism related industries in one UK city between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart gives information about the the amount of
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in tourism-related industries in the United Kingdom from 1989 to 2009 in various categories: Restaurants, hotels, sports & leisure and travel & tours.
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, by observing the graph, all the four industries showed some fluctuations throughout a 20-year period of time. In 1989, there were about 1100
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in restaurants, and after five years it increased by nearly 200.
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2004, it reached its highest point of 1600
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, outracing all the other industries, before decreasing in 2009 to 1994 levels.
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, hotel
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experienced an upward trend in the beginning and reached a peak in 1994, it
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started
to decrease slightly throughout the period, before going back to 1989 levels. Sports and leisure started at almost 900,
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they fell by nearly 200, before rising to approximately 1100 in the year 1994.
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it continued to fall till the end in 2009.
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, travel and tours went down by half, from 800 in 1989 to 400 in 2009.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words jobs with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • significant increase
  • moderate rise
  • sharp fall
  • peak
  • trough
  • stagnant
  • sector
  • tourism-related industries
  • employment figures
  • data
  • time period
  • comparison
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