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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart provides
infomation
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information
 about three various reasons for air pollution in millions of
tonnes
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 in a European country between 1990 and 2005.
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, it's noticeable that the industry and the
houshold
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household
 rates showed a downward trend,
while
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the
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transport remained steady. in 1990, the air pollution that came out from
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the houshold
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houshold
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household
 was about one
million
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tonnes
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,
then
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 it started decreasing and reached its lowest point in 2005 with nearly 0%.
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,
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 transport started at almost one
million
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tonnes
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, it experienced some fluctuation, before coming back to 1990 levels.
The air
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Air
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 pollution from industry was the highest in 2005, almost 4 times higher
thean
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than
then
 transport and
housholds
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households
, with nearly below 6
million
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tonnes
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.
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, throughout the 15-year period, it dropped to just 2
million
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. So, the
overall
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 trend went down from almost 7
millios
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million
millions
 to about 3
million
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tonnes
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 throughout the entire period.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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