The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tabular data demonstrates the sources of
police
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the police
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budget,
while
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the two pie charts illustrate the spending between 2017 and 2018 in one certain area of Britain.
Overall
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, the total budget for police increased as a whole. The source of local taxes
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by the highest
amout
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amount
,
then
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followed
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by the national government and other resources,
such
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as grants. In terms of
the
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expenditure, the proportion of salaries decreased,
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the spending on technology increased, and the ratio of investment
on
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buildings and transport remained unaltered. On the source of funding, the official government
rose
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the
amout
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amount
by 2.3 million pounds. The local taxes grew by 11.1 million, which represents the highest growth. The rest of
sources
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also
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added by
slight
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value of 0.5 million. On the side of spending, the percentage of salaries reduced by 3 percentage points. As for the resources contributed to technology rose by 6 percentage points. The
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and establishment of traffic remained
the
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same rate of 17%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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