The line graph gives us information about the percentage of participation by club members in three different courses which are swimming,
team
sports, and gym activities from 1995 to 2015.
As we can seeUse synonyms
that
, both Correct word choice
apply
team
sports and gym activities Use synonyms
are has
risen from the beginning of the Wrong verb form
have
periode
. Still, Correct your spelling
period
team
sports witnessed a bit Use synonyms
slow down
Correct your spelling
of a slowdown
in
the end of Change the preposition
at
Correct article usage
the years
years
. Fix the agreement mistake
year
On the contrary
, only swimming Linking Words
that
greatly declined over all the years.
In the year of 1995, swimming started at 50% before Correct pronoun usage
apply
fallen
down in 2015 touched nearly 15%. For Wrong verb form
falling
Use synonyms
team
Add an article
a team
sport
, we can conclude that experienced just above 30% and grew up Fix the agreement mistake
sports
regurarly
until 2010Correct your spelling
regularly
,
and decreased to just Remove the comma
apply
berlow
30% in the Correct your spelling
below
last
year.
And Linking Words
then
, gym activities Linking Words
also
went up stagnantly from 0% in the year Linking Words
of
1995 to 20% in the Change preposition
apply
last
Linking Words
periode
.Correct your spelling
period
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