It is often said, “when in Rome, do as the Romans do”. Do you think people should adapt and accept the culture of the country they visit? Do you think it is possible to learn a culture without learning the language?

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in Rome, do as the Romans do", I rather agree with
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statment
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statement
than disagree, since
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situation in the world we
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with the mixing of the cultures that are well established and have
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own history. When you
visit
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country or another
culture
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, you are there, first of all, to see what are the difference
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between
your worldview and the
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you
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, to adopt new information, get more ideas, not to spread your
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. That may vary if that was the main purpose of your
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,
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, we will talk about the general visiting for a vacation.
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, when you
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the
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you meet with the basic knowledge
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to stay, places to
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, etc. At
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point, the great idea would be to
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check some basic knowledge about
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and their manners. What is considered
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vulgar activity in the local
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, what is
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totally
normal, etc. If we take Japan as an example, drinking is a part of the
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there,
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in Ukraine we may be very strict
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the
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drunk
people
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, in Japan it is
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totally
normal to
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down drunk on the street after
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a buisness
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buisness
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business
meeting. Reporting it to the police may be considered
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a rude act. Another good example, teaching
people
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in Italy how to make a proper pizza, would not
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! So I would rather say that if you
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other countries, better to observe and learn what you see
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, not to
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teach
people
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. With regard to
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I would say that it is more than half of the
culture
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is basically in the
language
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.
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my opinion it is easy to understand if you dig down to your own
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as
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Ukrainian
for example
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,
while
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some of the words may be funny for different regions, it has the same
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sense
,
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something that can
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people
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together,
language
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is some type of the hidden treasure of the
culture
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. To
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sum
up, when you
visiting
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another country, you should accept and adapt
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a
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culture
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of the palace you
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, you have your own ideas and can make conclusions without comments. If there option to learn another
language
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and you like it, go for it, it would be
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fabalous
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fabulous
journey, and there
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better experience as to speack on local
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at some
amaizing
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amazing
place
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.

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task achievement
You provide relevant examples to support your points, such as the cultural differences between Japan and Ukraine.
coherence and cohesion
Your conclusion summarizes your main ideas well and reiterates your opinion on the importance of adopting local culture.

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