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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph
illustraites
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illustrates
 the key sources of
fuel
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 that
are
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were
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 produced in the United Kingdom from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
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, the initial
level
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 of Petroleum was the highest produced kind of
fuel
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 with
an
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approximate
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 90 million tonnes of oil in 1981,
whereas
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the
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coal
platued
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plateaued
placed
 at the
level
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 of approximately 80 tonnes. The coal comprised the lowest kind of production which was nearly 40 of the energy unit.
Initialy
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Initially
the
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Petroleum was the highest energy type and after
rasing
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rising
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 from over 90 units tell 140 it stayed steady until the year
of
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1987
where
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when
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 it dropped dramatically to 100 tonnes. After
that
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 it picked up to 140 again,
The coal
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Coal
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 and natural gas are the other
type
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types
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 of
fuel
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 in the UK. The coal in 1981 stabilized at over 90
fuel
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 units, after
that
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 it collapsed until it became the lowest produced kind with a
level
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 of less than 40.
Subsequently
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, the levels of coal had
a fluctuations
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fluctuations
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untill
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until
 it leveled off at below 30 in 2000.
The natural
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Natural
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 gas was the
less
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least
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 used and
manfactured
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manufactured
 source at the beginning with a
level
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 of just below 40 in 1981, it stood at 40 until the year
of
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apply
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1991 it escalated
till
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to
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 its peak which
is
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was
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 100 units in 2000. Question

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel, level with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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