The bar chart
depict
the proportion of three groups of Japanese children Change the verb form
depicts
join
four types of activities in 2018.
It is evident that 5 to 8 Wrong verb form
joining
years
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old
children are more Correct word choice
apply
popular
to watch TV, Correct word choice
likely
while
playing computer games Linking Words
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
decline
in 9 to 11 Change the verb form
declined
years
Use synonyms
old
. Correct word choice
apply
Besides
, watching TV and reading are the same percentages in 9 to 11 Linking Words
years
old and 12 to 16 Use synonyms
years
old.
In Use synonyms
the
watching TV, 5 to 8 Correct article usage
apply
years
old are most percentages(90%) than other groups were the same as 80%, Use synonyms
while
playing computer games show a downward trend Linking Words
to
every Change preposition
for
groups
, only 60%(5 to 8 Change to a singular noun
group
years
old)、58%(9 to 11 Use synonyms
years
old) and 40% (12 to 16 Use synonyms
years
old).
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On the other hand
, 80% of Linking Words
riding
the bike over 12 Correct pronoun usage
those riding
to16
is the most Correct your spelling
to 16
higer
than Correct your spelling
higher
other group
by 5 to 8(62%) and 9 to 11(60%) Change the wording
another group
other groups
years
old. As for reading, both of 9 to 11 age and 12 to 16 age are the same percentages, about 70%, and 5 to 8 Use synonyms
years
old decrease to 60%.Use synonyms
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