The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

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The map illustrates probably the changes that will occur in the

centre

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of a small city called Islip

for

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apply

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times

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time

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. Clearly, there will be several changes and

developing

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developments

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in the city, the most noticeable being the increases in accommodation and

carriageaway

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carriageway

carriage away

, the introduction of shopping

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centre

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centres

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and

station

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stations

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, and the decline of

park

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the park

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area

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areas

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. Turning to the

present day

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map, it can be seen that shops are located on both sides of the main road.

Couple

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of housing are involved in the

centre

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and

sorth

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south

north

of the map.

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looked

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looking

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at the town

centre

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now, there are only

school

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schools

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and park

area

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areas

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southern west and southern east respectively. The urban area is desired to develop and build

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apply

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new settlement regions. It is forecast that

main

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the main

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road replaced only pedestrians will be destroyed. Meantime, one side of the pedestrian is projected to be constructed bus station, shopping

centre

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, car park and new housing

while

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, on the other side of

the

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this

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way, it is anticipated to be situated shops.

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, the

schoold

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school

schools

remains

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the reduction of parking space. It is

also

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envisaged to

be add

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new

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a new

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dual

carriageaway

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carriageway

, where it does not before, surrounding the city.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

201 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

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Centre
Development
Maps
Plans
Introduce
Topic
Purpose
Essay
Description
Current
Key features
Facilities
Advantages
Positive aspects
Benefits
Proposed
Changes
Improvements
Suggested
Potential
Course of action
Summarize
Opinion

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