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The graph below shows the amount of air pollutants released in the UK from 1990 to 2005, measured in million tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of air pollutants released in the UK from 1990 to 2005, measured in million tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
graph
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 presents how many air pollutants
that had
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 released in the UK from 1990 to 2005.
In
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From
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 1990 to 2005 the total air pollutants
was
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were
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 falling down and
the
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apply
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most of
this
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graph
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is
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was
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in
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from
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 1990. The transport and
households
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household
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 graphs were
conflict
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in conflict
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 because transport was growing
up
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apply
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but
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the household
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household
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households
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was
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were
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 going down, even if
it
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they
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start
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started
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 at the same point. For the industry
graph
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in
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from
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 1991 to 1996 it had sloped that decrease it cleared. In 2005 the
graph
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had
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continued
decline
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to decline
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excepted
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except
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transport
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the transport
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graph
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 had slightly increased a little.
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 the graphs
were told
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show
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 that
UK
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the UK
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 has less
pollution
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. The place that has the most
pollution
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 is
the
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industry which has
release
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released
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pollution
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around
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of around
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 7 million tonnes. And the least
pollution
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 is the households which
has
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have
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 almost no
pollution
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. The
different
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difference
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 between the most and least of
this
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graph
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 in 1990 and 2005, in 1990 the
different
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difference
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 was about 7.5 million tonnes and in 2005 the
different
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difference
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 was about 1.9 million tonnes.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, pollution with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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