The diagram below shows how coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagram illustrates the process of producing electricity.
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, it can be observed that the process starts with a combination of coal and oxygen which undergoes various steps including heating in order to produce gas and steam which is used to generate electron The initial step focuses on preparing the raw materials.
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, coal will be poured into the massive kiln where oxygen is added for heating, the resulting byproducts include raw syngas and slag.
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the mixture moves to the removal stage, releasing CO2, Mercury and Sulphur. The purified syngas
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slag are spun in a gas turbine before being sent to the generator in order to produce current for wholesalers. The other step after spinning in the gas turbine. The hot exhaust gases move to a factory where steam is generated and discharge flue gases into the environment. After that, the water vapour turbine will receive steam to turn and the result is sent to the generator. At
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stage,
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machine will transform into electricity for consumers.

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