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percentage
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a
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other
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people mostly use Replace the word
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a
housing expenditure.
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the chart , individuals utilize a majority of other goods and Linking Words
services
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it
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which
health care
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healthcare
expense
is %6 in Japan. Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
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citiziens
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citizens
it
is about %34 and health careCorrect pronoun usage
which
againly
lower it is %3 . Correct your spelling
again
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two country health care consumption is less than other expenditures. Change preposition
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and other
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is accounted
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account
over
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expense
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expenses
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