The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Zhaina

The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Zhaina
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Zhaina
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The bar chart displays the
amount
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number
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of individuals who smoked cigarettes in the United Kingdom during the time period from 2011 to 2021 in millions.
Overall
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, it can be seen from the graph that there was a downward trend
of
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for
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both genders who smoked cigarettes in Britain throughout the given period.
However
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, men always had the highest numbers of smokers. In 2011, the amount of males who smoked was the highest over time, at up to 4
million
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more than the peak point of females at over 3.5
million
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.
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, smoking rates by women and men saw a slight fluctuation until 2019 and 2018, respectively. The
amount
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number
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of males who smoked decreased dramatically during the period in the
last
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three years from approximately 2.75
million
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to up
1
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to 1
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million
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. Compared to females, the rate witnessed a significant drop during the
last
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4 years from about 1.7
million
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to nearly 0.75
million
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • gradual decline
  • percentage
  • population
  • significant
  • notably
  • prevalence
  • demographics
  • comparative analysis
  • government initiatives
  • public health campaigns
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