The line graph
illustartes
the Correct your spelling
illustrates
number
of international tourists who visited five Use synonyms
countries
( the United States of America, France, Malaysia, Brazil, and Egypt ), in a 15-year period, from 1995 to 2010.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the USA were the most popular destination for the Linking Words
traveler
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traveller
troughout
the period, Correct your spelling
throughout
while
Brazil and Egypt were the least visited Linking Words
countries
.
In 1995, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
USA's
visitors was about 70 Change noun form
USA
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millions
, Change to singular
million
then
the Linking Words
number
began to increase gradually until reaching its peak of approximately 90 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
millions
by the end of the period. Change to singular
million
Moreover
, France and Malaysia show an upward trend, both Linking Words
countries
started below 40 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
millions
. After which, Change to singular
million
witness
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witnessed
a
growth in tourists Remove the article
apply
number
, Use synonyms
finshing
at approximately 80 and 50 Correct your spelling
finishing
Use synonyms
millions
Change to singular
million
respectivly
by 2010.
In Correct your spelling
respectively
term
of the remained Fix the agreement mistake
terms
countries
, Use synonyms
Brazil's
and Egypt show a Change noun form
Brazil
smiliar
trend, the Correct your spelling
similar
number
of Use synonyms
traveler
were almost 10 million and continued to rise slightly, reaching nearly 20 million by 2010.Change to a plural noun
travelers
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