The graph below gives information about the number of tourists who visited five different countries between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the number of tourists who visited five different countries between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph
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illustrates
the
number
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of international tourists who visited five
countries
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( the United States of America, France, Malaysia, Brazil, and Egypt ), in a 15-year period, from 1995 to 2010.
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,
it is clear that
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the USA were the most popular destination for the
traveler
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troughout
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throughout
the period,
while
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Brazil and Egypt were the least visited
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. In 1995, the
number
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of
USA's
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USA
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visitors was about 70
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millions
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million
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,
then
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the
number
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began to increase gradually until reaching its peak of approximately 90
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millions
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million
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by the end of the period.
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, France and Malaysia show an upward trend, both
countries
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started below 40
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millions
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million
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. After which,
witness
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a
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apply
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growth in tourists
number
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,
finshing
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finishing
at approximately 80 and 50
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millions
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million
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respectivly
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respectively
by 2010. In
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of the remained
countries
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,
Brazil's
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Brazil
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and Egypt show a
smiliar
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similar
trend, the
number
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of
traveler
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travelers
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were almost 10 million and continued to rise slightly, reaching nearly 20 million by 2010.

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