The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.
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The bar chart illustrates the rank of online activities that are popular in Slovakia in July.
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it is clear that
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women have more activities on the
internet
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than men. The top 4 activities are
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Banking, Social Networking, Messaging, and Using Email. All of them are dominated by females, even though the participants of all of the top four are more than 70
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, both female
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male. An exception is for men who do networking, with almost 70% of male
users
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doing it. The highest activity for
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users
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is using email, with almost 90% of
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users
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are women, respectively. Job hunting was the lowest activity to do,
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the proportion between males and females was almost the same, more than 20%. Women are more likely to search about health problems, with more than 60
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,
while
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only half of them are men
users
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. Online education was taken by 20 to 30
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percent
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of
internet
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users
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,
while
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around 50
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percent
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of people
using
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internet
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for video or music streaming.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, percent, users with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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