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of
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for
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fuel
such
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oil
and Use synonyms
gas
is increasing day by day, So we have to search remote Use synonyms
areas
to extract them. Use synonyms
Altough
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Although
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process
has Use synonyms
unfavorable
outcomes, I believe that we should keep searching for these kinds of Change the spelling
unfavourable
energy
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untill
we can use another source of Correct your spelling
until
energy
globally.
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Admitedly
,a lot of detrimental effects stem from searching and extracting Correct your spelling
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oil
and Use synonyms
gas
. First and Use synonyms
for most
, for Correct your spelling
foremost
this
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process
we need to prepare the area for extraction. By preparing, I mean cutting down trees in jungles and digging large holes in oceans. Use synonyms
Therefore
, we are Linking Words
destructing
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destroying
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the enviroment
enviroment
and other specie's Correct your spelling
environment
home
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homes
for getting
more amount of fossil Change preposition
to get
energy
. Use synonyms
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, in Linking Words
persian
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Persian
golf
there Add a comma
golf,
are
a lot of Change the verb form
is
extarcting
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extracting
utilitize
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utilities
utilize
which
work 24 hours a day. Correct pronoun usage
who
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, in these Linking Words
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areas
we Add a comma
areas,
cant
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can't
animal
because they have gone or killed since the Fix the agreement mistake
animals
process
of extraction started.
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However
,finding and extracting Linking Words
oil
and Use synonyms
gas
has Use synonyms
undenyabel
consequences but the advantages are more than disadvantages for now. These years Fossil Correct your spelling
undeniable
feuls
have become the main source of our industries and transfer systems. Most of our vehicles work with Correct your spelling
fuels
feels
gas
and there are a Use synonyms
little
amount of them which work with batteries. In the near future maybe we can replace Correct word choice
small
oil
and Use synonyms
gas
with other sorts of Use synonyms
energy
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such
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now
they are our main source. So, Add a comma
now,
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new Correct your spelling
finding
areas
and damaging them for extracting fossil Use synonyms
feuls
is Correct your spelling
fuels
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an unfovarble
unfovarble
action but mandatory at the same time.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
unfavourable
however
, some individuals think that damaging untouched Linking Words
areas
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for gaining
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to gain
gas
and Use synonyms
oil
is not Use synonyms
neccesary
, I would say thatCorrect your spelling
necessary
,
it is essential Remove the comma
apply
untill
we can replace these sources with better ones. So even if Correct your spelling
until
this
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process
has detrimental effects, we have to do it for our own needs.Use synonyms
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