You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organisers. In your letter:  Explain why you are interest in helping  Give details suitable past experience  Suggest ways you might help with the event

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Dear Sir or Madam. Hello, I hope
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letter finds you well. I am writing
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letter because I would like to join your
event
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as a member.
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of all, I like helping other people, especially
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event
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events
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Because my father was the best
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in my hometown,
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, He is dead now,
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, I really want to do something for his hobby.
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, I had experience in
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a samiliar
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samiliar
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similar
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event
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events
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last
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year, I was
orgnising
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organising
organizing
people who have
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.
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, I was selling tickets for the
audence
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audience
. So I hope I am suitable for
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event
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.
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, there are many duties which I can do
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as
orgnision
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organising
people and
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I can be a security gate. even though you want me a night shift I can. I have other things I did not mention here. Thank you, I am looking forward to hearing back from you. Kim sincerely

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to have a clear introduction that states the purpose of your letter. Consider using phrases like 'I am writing to apply for the volunteer position.'
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that your ideas are grouped logically in paragraphs. Each paragraph should contain one main idea to improve clarity.
task achievement
Use more appropriate words and expressions to demonstrate your enthusiasm and suitability for the role, such as 'I admire your cause' or 'I believe my experience will contribute positively.'
task achievement
You show a personal connection to the cause, which adds emotional weight to your application.
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You provide specific examples of your past experience, which helps establish your capability.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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