Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which will causes many health problems. Sigary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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"The Role of a Healthy Lifestyle in Enhancing Physical Well-Being, Mental

Health

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, and

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Quality of Life" .

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issues may cause of high

deficency

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deficiency

efficiency

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suger

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sugar

inside

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drinks and food. I strongly agree with the

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increase

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price

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suger

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sugar

to fire

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apply

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people to become

health

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conscious.

Explanation

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of my answer will be in

following

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paragraph. One of the main

reason

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reasons

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acceptence

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acceptance

is the

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health related

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problem

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the regular

consumtion

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consumption

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suger

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sugar

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sugar

have

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less natural sweetness but

full

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of chemicals, which cause heart issues , brain issues and kidney

falier

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failure

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this

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kind of major

breakdowns

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suger

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sugar

in our body, gives harmful consequences.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

285 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

manufactured food
sugar intake
health issues
obesity
diabetes
heart disease
healthcare costs
public health
sugar tax
revenue
reformulate
health-conscious
consumer behavior
deterrent effect
availability
affordability
wellness initiatives

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Some think scientists should be allowed to send messages into space to communicate with other life forms while others believe this is too dangerous. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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