The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction from 2030 adn 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction from 2030 adn 2040.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction from 2030 adn 2040.
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the population in four Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2030
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prediction
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between 2030 and 2040.
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, in 1970
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was
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not too many living in
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,but every 10 years
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the percentage spachily in Malaysia.
Philippines
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in 1970 is over 30%
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1990
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50% after the
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from 1990 to 2010 is
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it's back to 40%, between 2010 and 2040 is the
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and she ends
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50%. Malaysia in 1970
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30% , the line is
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until 2040 and ends around 80%.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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