The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph displays the
number
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of
students
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from Iran, Greece, and Turkey who enrolled at Sheffield University from 2005 to 2009.  
Overall
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, Greek
students
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had the highest
number
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who enrolled at Sheffield University in the beginning.
While
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there was a dramatic decrease
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students
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from Greece throughout the given period,
students
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from Iran and Turkey increased rapidly.   In 2005, the
number
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of Greek
students
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stood at 180
students
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and rose slightly after one year to reach around 50
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.
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, there was a sudden decline for the following year, becoming the second-highest
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of
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, equal to Iran at about 70
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.
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they remained steady for one year before reaching the lowest point at up 40 in 2009.  
On the other hand
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,
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from Turkey grew significantly by 100, from 20 to 120
students
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.
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, there was
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rapid growth for Iranian
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, who started at 40
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, to reach 80
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in 2008.
Then
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the rate saw a steep climb to 160
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, eventually.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enrolled
  • Enrollments
  • Trend
  • Steady increase
  • Initial increase
  • Decline
  • Sharp increase
  • Peaking
  • Noteworthy comparison
  • Contrasting trends
  • Period
  • Given period
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