Part 1 The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ' income in 2007,2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for Part 1 The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ' income in 2007,2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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describe

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describes

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the US household

units

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by their annual revenue in three years, 2007, 2011,

2015

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and 2015

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. Starting with 2007, there

was

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were

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nearly 30

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millions

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million

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houses that

earns

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earned

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100,000 or more, and it was the highest

number

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of houses,

also

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it was less than 15

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millions

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million

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units

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that

have

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had

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annual

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an annual

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income between 75,000-99,999, and

this

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one

represnt

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represent

represents

the lowest

number

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of households in 2007.

Moreover

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, in 2011 there was

significant

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a significant

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increase

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the

househols

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households

household

that

earn

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earned

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25,000-49,999, from more than 25

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millions

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million

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to nearly 30

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millions

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million

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units

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and

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apply

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this

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the highest group

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apply

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this

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year, and

also

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apply

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this

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year the lowest one was that

have

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had

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annual

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an annual

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income between 75,000-99,999, with less than 15

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millions

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million

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units

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Nevertheless

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, 2015

reach

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reached

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the

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its

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peak with more than 30 million

units

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that

earns

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earn

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annualy

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annually

annual

100,000 or more and

this

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was the highest

between

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all three years, even

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so,

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the lowest still the one

is earn

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earns

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between 75,000-99,999 but

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apply

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this

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year

it's grow

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it's growing

it's grown

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slightly to be exactly 15

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millions

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million

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number

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of households.

To sum up

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, there was no significant change between the three years just in 2015 we see the

hgist

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highest

heist

number

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units

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thats

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that

earn

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earned

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more than 100,000.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words units, millions, number with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
34
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

197 words

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Part 1 The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ' income in 2007,2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter ● inform them of your situation ● explain how this is affecting you ● request a new card

A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems can this cause? How might these problems be reduced?

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?