The pie charts below show energy production in Spain in 2008 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show energy production in Spain in 2008 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show energy production in Spain in 2008 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of
energy
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generated in Spain in 2008 and 2017.
It is clear that
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in 2008, the most popular types of
energy
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produced were coal, oil, and gas,
whereas
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over 9 years, the volumes of coal generated there reduced
signficantly
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significantly
.
Overall
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, the percentage of nuclear and renewable
energy
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increased. Focusing first on the principal sources of
energy
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, in the initial year, Spain generated approximately 30% of coal and oil for each,
while
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throughout the period, the corresponding figures decreased by roughly 5 and 10 per cent, respectively. Regarding gas, the proportion of
this
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fuel remained constant over
9-year
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period, at roughly 23%. As for the remaining
energy
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types, in 2008, the levels of nuclear and renewable
energy
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were nearly 10% for each, as opposed to 2017, when these figures rose by more than 5%. With respect to the other types of
energy
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, their production was approximately the same, with 2 to 3% generated throughout 9 years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy production
  • renewable sources
  • fossil fuels
  • wind energy
  • solar energy
  • coal
  • natural gas
  • oil
  • percentage
  • increase
  • decrease
  • diversification
  • energy strategy
  • environmental policy
  • sustainable energy
  • electricity generation
  • transitional energy sources
  • energy efficiency
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