The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line chart contrasts percentages of households with
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certain
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- including MP3 Players, mobile phones, computers and tablets - from 1995 to 2015.
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became increasingly more common throughout the periods. In 1995, MP3 Players dominated the market (at 15%); but by 2015, mobile phones and computers were the most widely owned
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(at 95%). Most notably,
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mobile phones
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saw a surge in
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ownership between
1995 and 2000 (from 8% to 70%), with tablets following the same trend between 2005 and 2010 (from 8% to 63%).
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, with the
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of 2000 and 2005 (when the rise was 30%), computers witnessed consistent increases of 15%
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in between
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. On top of that, not including when tablets came out in the middle of 2000 and 2005, MP3 Players fell behind others with shallow growth over the years, despite being the industry leader in 1995. In conclusion, the development of technology allowed widespread ownership of
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electronic
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, as popularity and trust rocketed in the 2000s.

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