The given diagram of the area of Bellingham where the number of people had a significant rise from 1980 to 2019.
To
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Overall
overall
, Linking Words
this
map represents the Linking Words
towns
infrastructure, main buildings and dates when places were developing.
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town's
Firstly
, from 1980 to 1989 the first territory to progress was an Linking Words
orange marked
one next to the main road in the west. Sooner in 1990-Add a hyphen
orange-marked
1999
second staged areas started progressing, Add a comma
1999,
moreover
, in that time Linking Words
Railway
line and school were built in the town.
Correct article usage
a Railway
Secondly
, Linking Words
third
stage of development was from 2000 to 2009 in a Change the article
the third
Add a hyphen
blue-marked
blue marked
area Add a hyphen
blue-marked
that is
crossed by Linking Words
major
road in the west, Add an article
a major
furthermore
, local Linking Words
hospitals
construction was in that period. Freeway, Sports stadium and housing were placed during the fourth stage of development in 2010-2019 in territories from Fix the agreement mistake
hospital
the
both sides of the major road in the Remove the article
apply
north-east
.
Correct your spelling
northeast
To conclude
, Linking Words
as a consequence
of overcrowding the city Linking Words
it
has dramatically changed its infrastructure Correct pronoun usage
apply
as well as
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progressing
a lot.Wrong verb form
progressed
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