Are computers, an essential feature of modern education? What subjects can be better taught using computers? Are there aspects of a good education that cannot be taught using computers?

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contemporary world,
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become
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feature of
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. They are
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part and parcel of modern
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. Mostly all subjects whether Literature or Science can be better demonstrated using them.
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me, there are
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aspects
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of a better
education
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that cannot be taught using
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. Without
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computer
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modernization would be incomplete. Because
now-a-days
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nowadays
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they are assisting in almost every task. Electronic mails are
preffered
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preferred
to send any text safely and fastly. From solving a huge expression of arithmetic
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to
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powerpoints
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. They make both our
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and life easier.
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, in preparation
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exams or
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any document, earlier people spent most of their time
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such
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. But now, they
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everything simple and it is
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time
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investment so have advantages like
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and cost-effectiveness.
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,
computers
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are
key
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feature of modern
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.
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, mostly all the subjects
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as Social studies, Mathematics,
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and many more taught more efficiently to students by
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.
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, Science
teacher
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teachers
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can make
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with animation on
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topic
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topics
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like contraction and relaxation of
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,
can
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which can
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be projected on screens and students learn with more clarity and understanding
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how oxygenated and deoxygenated blood comes and leaves via chambers rather than studying theoretically through books only. So
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technology
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teaching more effective. I believe that the
aspects
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of a good
education
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can be taught using
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but not all, in terms of morals,values and ethics.These
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plays
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a pivotal role in
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.
Education
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isn't only memorizing and
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first position in exams but
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can make a society more powerful.
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, I must say these
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cannot be taught using
computers
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alone. In conclusion,
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are
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part of
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in
modern
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the modern
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and globalized era.
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really proved helpful to both teachers and students in teaching and learning respectively.
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, teachings of
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morals
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and ethics
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fulfilled by
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solely.

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Expand your discussion on the aspects of good education that cannot be taught by computers, providing more specific examples or explanations.
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Your introduction effectively sets the topic and indicates your stance on the role of computers in education.
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You provided relevant examples, particularly the use of animations in Science lessons, which illustrates your point well.

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