You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: oapologize for what happened oexplain why you missed the deadline otell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

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Respected sir, I am writing

this

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letter

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you to apologise for missing the deadline

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the work , leading to

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the lose

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lose

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of an important client. I have been working for

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company for the

last

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10 years and since

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had

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never

compromise

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with

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my work

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However

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although

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I am here to take the blame

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all loss

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negilence

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negligence

, it was

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external factor

which

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I have no control.Potentially, on the due date of

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the assignement

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assignement

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assignment

the weather was harsh because of

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a snowstorm

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this

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result

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resulted

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poweroutrage

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power

leading to no

availbility

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availability

internet

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.The

assigement

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assignment

was ready but has not been

submit

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due to

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the lack of network. Moving

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while

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I know the consequences of my mistakes are irreparable , I still explained my situation to the client and

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for a

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positive

response from him.I assure you that in the future, you will not detect

such

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issues from

myside

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my side

as I have decided to submit my all

the

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future

assigements

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assignments

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two days before the time

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frame

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. Looking forward to hearing a

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positive

response from your side and hoping you will understand my situation. Yours sincerely, Amarpreet

singh

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amarbatth367Sat Mar 22 2025

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coherence

Make sure to have clear paragraphing with each paragraph focusing on a single idea. This will improve the flow of your letter.

task achievement

You expressed a sincere apology, which is important and sets a positive tone for your letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

192 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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n the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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