The graph and table below give information about the percentage of graduates in Australia who worked full-time after university from 2004 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below give information about the percentage of graduates in Australia who worked full-time after university from 2004 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate the proportion of
graduates
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in Australia and the earnings of those who
employed
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were employed
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full-time after finishing their studies from 2004 to 2012.
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, it is evident that the majority of math
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were working on
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full-time basis and earning more than other
graduates
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. By observing the graph, it can be seen that in 2004, more than 75% of math
graduates
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were employed in their jobs, which remained constant till 2012.
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, approximately 60% of other degree holders were working in the initial year, which slightly inclined to 85% in the next year, but began to decrease over time and recorded around 62% in the
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year.
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, in 2004 and 2006, both
graduates
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were receiving the same sum of money
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$41000 and $43000. A minor difference of $5000, and $4000 was seen in 2008 and 2010 recorded
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$50000 and $51000 respectively.
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, math degree holders earned more money than others in 2012 $56000 and $51000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates with synonyms.
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