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The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck Country at different times of the year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck Country at different times of the year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
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The table illustrates the living patterns of the specific species of birds in Woodchuch Country at different seasons.
It is clear that
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 during a warm period of the year, there were observed many more species in
this
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 area,
whereas
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 in winter a vast
mojority
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majority
 of them
moved
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move
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 to different territories.
Overall
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, some types of flying creatures were able to survive in Woodchuck Country throughout both summer and winter. Focusing first on the species
resided
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that resided
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 in the country only during particular seasons, there were four of them
stayed
Correct pronoun usage
that stayed
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 there when the weather was warm including bluebirds, mockingbirds, orloles, and vireos. Regarding those adapted only to cold weather, only juncos were seen there in the
inhabitat
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Inhabitat
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. As for the remaining birds, cardinals, crows, and woodpeckers were able to live there
throughot
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throughout
through
a
Correct article usage
the
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 winter,
as well as
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summer
Correct article usage
the summer
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 period.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • species
  • observations
  • predominant
  • fluctuations
  • migration
  • habitat
  • seasonality
  • abundance
  • trends
  • data representation
  • year-round
  • population dynamics
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