The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.

The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.
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The chart illustrates the contribution of three different sectors,
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as agriculture, industry, and service, to India’s gross domestic production in five-decade intervals during the years between 1960 to 2000.
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, across five decades, the agricultural sector was declining in its impact on the GDP of India,
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services had steady growth. Meanwhile, the industry part remained relatively stable over time.
To begin
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with, the agricultural region faced a downward trend when it started at just over 60% in 1960, with later drops to around 50% in 1970 and a dramatic decline in 1990 when contribution fell to 30%.
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, in 2000, the influence of agriculture diminished to approximately 10%. At the same time, the service section started in 1960 with approximately 17%, and following the next decade, the impact rose up to 20%. During the next years, in 1980 and 1990, the contribution reached 30% and about 45% respectively,
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in 2000, the service sector reached its peak of over 60%. Meanwhile, the industry sector remained relatively stable when it started at 16% in 1960 and remained at the same influence of 26% during the next three decades.

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