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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting s particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Aliya.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting s particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Aliya.
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The line graph illustrates
amount
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the amount
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 of
travelers
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travellers
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 (in millions) visiting Caribbean
island
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islands
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 from 2010 to 2017.
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, all types of
visitors
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 increased every year,
while
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total
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a total
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 of
visitors
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 uploaded approximately for third and
half
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a half
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. In 2010 total
travelers
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were
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started from 1 million
people
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 and
then
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over all
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overall
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 period
given
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sharply upload
for
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to
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 3.5 million
of
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people
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. At first in 2010
visitors
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 staying on island ships were steady, but
then
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 started increasing from 20 11 to 2017, with some decreasing changes between 2015 and 2016, they were
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 for almost half a million
of
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people
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.
Visitors
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 which were stayed on cruise ships at the beginning of
period
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the period
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 were
flactual
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factual
,
after
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but after
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 2013 they started significantly growing and achieved
on
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an
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 average
2
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of 2
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millions
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million
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of
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people
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, people with synonyms.
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