The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The chart provides information about the leisure time spent by men and women of different employment statuses. The data was taken in the year 1998 to 1999.
Overall
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, the most free days were enjoyed by the females. First of all, from all of the professions, women took pleasure in their spare moments. The number was about nearly 40 to over 75
hours
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in a week.
Secondly
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, there was a similar number between unemployment and retired status from males and females. The amount of both was nearly 80
hours
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of free time.
In addition
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, part-time and home services
was
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were
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dominated by females. There were no males in these two types of occupations. The count of relaxation was around 40 to almost 60 weekly.
On the other hand
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, the guys only had the spare time full-time job, around 50
hours
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weekly.
However
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, they adore their free days when they were
unemployment
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unemployed
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and retired. The number of gentlemen who enjoyed their leisure moments in both statuses was the highest of all, over 80
hours
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • leisure time
  • employment status
  • full-time
  • part-time
  • unemployed
  • retired
  • disparity
  • illustrates
  • depicts
  • comparison
  • significant
  • notable
  • approximately
  • contrast
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • analyze
  • evaluate
  • data
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