The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate the transformation of Ryemouth village between 1995 and the present day.
Overall
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, significant changes have taken place, particularly in the southern and eastern areas, where new residential and recreational facilities have been introduced. In the southern part, the fishing port has been completely removed. Opposite to where it once stood, the fish market has been replaced by modern apartments.
Additionally
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, the shop to the north of the former fish market has been converted into a restaurant.
While
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the hotel remains unchanged, a car park has been constructed adjacent to it, and the café remains in its original location. To the west, several new houses have been built, and a new road has been introduced to improve connectivity between them. In the eastern section, the farmland has been transformed into a golf course, and a tennis court has been added.
However
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, the forest park has been removed.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • land use
  • residential expansion
  • modernization effort
  • commercial
  • urban development
  • preserved
  • recreational areas
  • transportation infrastructure
  • eco-friendly
  • renovation
  • transformation
  • bike paths
  • car park
  • establishment
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