The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014
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The data provides information about the price alternation of three
metals
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through the
year
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2014.
Overall
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, the price of nickel experienced fluctuation through the
year
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whereas
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the other
two
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metals
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saw moderate variation in their prices. Nickel started at six
percent
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per cent
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in January and continued falling to -3% in June, hitting the bottom of the price, with the lowest
number
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of the three
metals
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. After the
month
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, the figure
of
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for
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the nickel showed some recovery and stood at one
percent
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per cent
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in December, resulting in staying at the lowest. Zinc started from
the
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a
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lower
number
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than the other
two
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, with one in the first
month
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of the
year
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. In a
month
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, the figure reached a peak at three in February
while
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there was a decrease in the
number
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of copper in the same
month
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. After reaching a peak in February, even though the fluctuation can be seen in zinc over the
year
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,
at the end
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of the
year
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, it got the highest
number
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of all, standing
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two
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at two
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percent
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per cent
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. Regarding
to
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apply
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copper, it remained the position between the other
two
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in the first and the
last
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month
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in
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of
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2014, with an experience of a marginal variation ranging from 2 to -0.5%. It is noticeable that during the
two
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month
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months
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in summer, the prices of all the
metals
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leveled off.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words metals, year, two, number, month with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly change
  • prices of metals
  • trend
  • spike
  • fluctuation
  • increase
  • decrease
  • sharp rise
  • sharp fall
  • stability
  • volatility
  • data points
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • external factors
  • influences
  • market dynamics
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