The chart below shows the results of a survey about peoples coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about peoples coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the results of a survey about peoples coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the percentage of city residents who bought and visited in one month in five different regions in Australia.
Overall
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, most people in Australia preferred to drink
coffee
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or tea in a cafe rather than drink it and take it away in the past four weeks; the exception was humans in Adelaide.   Individuals in Hobart and Melbourne went to cafes at about 62% each in the
last
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month to become the highest figures in the survey. In terms of buying fresh or instant
coffee
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, there was a significant variance in Hobart by nearly 15% compared to Sydney and Melbourne by nearly 2% and 5%, respectively.  
On the other hand
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,
while
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the
member
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members
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of society in Adelaide tended to purchase instant
coffee
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more than visit a cafe by almost 1%, they were the unique people who had
this
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preference.
However
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, the proportion of purchasing fresh
coffee
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in Adelaide and Melbourne was the same at below 35%.
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figure is the
least
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lowest
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compared to other cities.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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