The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 
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This
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the figure of books read by
male
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males
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and
female
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females
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at Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the total number of
men
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male
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readers
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increased over the period,
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the number of female readers has decreased. To be specific, the
precentage
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percentage
of men readers had a steady went up from 3000 in 2011 to 4000 in 2012.
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, there was a rapid leap in the proportion of books that men read from 4000 to 14000 over 2 years and
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the
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. By the
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contrast
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, the number of books that women read had increased to 10000 in 2013 before decreasing to only 7000
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the end of the period.

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