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The table shows information about metro systems in six different cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows information about metro systems in six different cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table can be used to compare how different the metro systems are between New York,
London
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,
Tokyo
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, Paris, Mexico, and Beijing.
Overall
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New
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 York City Subway has the most lanes, with the largest total length;
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, Benijin and
Tokyo
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 have the biggest proportion of annual journeys, and
London
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 is the city where metro tickets are the most expensive. The New York Underground System is made of 24
lines
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; covering 659 miles, it is the biggest metro system among 6 different cities. In second place, there is Beijing with 19
lines
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, and
last
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 on the podium there is Paris, with 16 of them. Even if Paris is the third city for
number
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a number
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 of
lines
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,
London
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, with 11
lines
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, covers more ground, 249 miles. For
lines
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 and total length,
Tokyo
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 and Mexico are equal,
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Tokyo
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 has more annual journeys, 3.1 billion, almost reaching Beijing
that
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which
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, with 3.6 billion journeys a year, holds the first place. In
London
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, a single ticket costs $7.30, which is way above the average cost of $2;
meanwhile
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 Mexico has the cheapest price, $0.23, similar to Beijing, where a single ticket costs $0.45

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Vocabulary: Replace the words london, tokyo, lines with synonyms.
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