ome people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

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on solving community problems. The idea of searching for signs of life on
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been increasing with minimum space to stay on it ,
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that lead to chronic health
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to chronic
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that affects adults and children, so we need to look for
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. The search for another
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can lead to economic problems as it is very expensive and has unpredictable
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because no water or oxygen
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should focus on more realistic projects to improve our community.
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on health care to improve
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for untreatable diseases.
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freely. A special financial budget for building more schools and
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to improve
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society. These significant goals are important to achieve the vision of our
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predictable result. In conclusion, working on the vision of living on
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of all the
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energy without any benefits, on
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Strengthen your introduction by clearly outlining the main points you will discuss in your essay. Ensure that the thesis statement captures both sides of the argument clearly.
coherence cohesion
Improve paragraph structure by clearly separating ideas. Each paragraph should focus on a single point with a clear topic sentence.
coherence cohesion
Use more formal language and correct grammatical structures to increase clarity. For example, phrases like 'non-useful idea' can be rephrased more eloquently.
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Add specific examples or evidence to support your arguments. This could include statistical data or references to scientific missions.
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You presented both sides of the argument effectively and included your own opinion, demonstrating a balanced approach to the topic.
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You provided reasons for your opinions, which shows an effort to support your argument, such as mentioning overcrowding and health issues.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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