Your colleague is traveling from another country by plane for a meeting. You have arranged the airport pickup, hotel accommodation and planned his/her meetings. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should: •say when and where you will meet him/her •explain where he/she will stay •tell him/her about the other arrangements you made.

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Dear Adam, It is great news to hear that you are coming to visit me in Canada. I am so excited to meet you and enjoy the next week with you. I will be waiting for you at

entranve

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entrance

three, just in front of Planet Donuts. The place is so crowded and busy.

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, you can find a spot and wait till I reach you. You can buy some coffee if I am too late. You will stay in a very fancy five-star hotel near the lakeshore. The view is amazing, you will love it. I'm happy to let you know that there is a very nice and warm indoor swimming pool on the 4th floor.

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Also

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Also,

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there is a big gym room

opend

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open

24 hours. I've arranged to visit the Toronto National Museum on the third day of your visit. I'm sure

this

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will be a new experience for you.

Moreover

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, we will go for a tour in

the

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apply

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downtown

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apply

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Toronto,

you

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so you

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shouldn't miss

this

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chance.

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Finally

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we can enjoy a lovely dinner at

mandarine

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a mandarine

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resturant

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restaurant

. I can't wait to see you at the airport.

your

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yours

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sincerely, Haya Haya

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Grammar

Make sure to proofread for minor spelling errors, such as 'entranve','opend', and 'mandarine'.

Coherence

Consider organizing the information more clearly, perhaps by using separate paragraphs for each point (meeting details, hotel stay, activities).

Tone

Including a more formal closing could enhance the overall tone of the letter.

Tone

The letter conveys excitement and warmth, which aligns well with the purpose of the message.

Task Achievement

The arrangements made for the colleague are described clearly and positively, showing thoughtfulness.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

191 words

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