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Writing Samples
Band 4.5

One of your friends wants to apply for a job involving working with foreign teenagers. Write a letter of recommendation for him/her.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing a
lettter
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letter
 regarding
job
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a job
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 recommendation
to
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for
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 my
colleage
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college
colleague
 friend Bracewell. He wants to apply for
a
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apply
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work involving working with foreign
adolescent
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adolescents
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. He is
an
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apply
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extremely good in English which is
most
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apply
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essential to
deal
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 with
out of country
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out-of-country
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 youth. I would appreciate it if you could provide him
job
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a job
the job
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.
Consequence
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, I strongly recommend him to appoint
in
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to
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 your company so that he can achieve his goal which he
have
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has
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fashionate
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fashioned
fashionable
especially
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on
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in
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 foreign trade
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, therefore,
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therefore
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 involvement with
the
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apply
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noncitizens is much easier.
Moreover
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, He is
very
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a very
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 much
puntual
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punctual
 and hardworking person in his work.
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, I know him in our college seminars as well
in
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as in
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 peer
group
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groups
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 he studied day and night for his seminar
finally
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 he got first place in
debate
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the debate
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 competition. I would be grateful to you if you accept
his
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the
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 job application form
what
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that
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 he applied
in
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for on
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 your online website through my guidelines. I am waiting for your interview call. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward
for
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 your response. Yours Sincerely, Latha Nagaraju.

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grammar
Make sure to check spelling and grammar, especially for words like 'letter' and 'colleague.' Attention to detail is essential in formal writing.
structure
Organize your ideas into clearer paragraphs, each focusing on a single main idea. This will enhance clarity for the reader.
content
Your intent to recommend your friend is clear, and you provide specific examples to support your recommendation, which is commendable.
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